She uses so few words
To say so much
Her verbal dexterity
Is as precise as a gymnast
Defying gravity with a flourish
Creatively observing each object
And every action and inaction
Rhyme, reason and contradiction
With the insight of the ages
Sculpting verbal works of art
That should be cast in bronze
Or chiseled from Carraran quarries
By some modern Michaelangelo
But instead
Even better
Her words are winged electric
Appearing wherever they need to
Now
And now
And now
To you
David Trudel © 2013
David, you are an inspiration to me, as well. Thank you for this.
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Oh, if only I were this precise. But, thank you! You have given me something to aspire to.
I concur with what David has written – I can only aspire to height she has reached.
I agree!
winged electric–YES. Cheers to Susan 🙂
I want to be her! Love this: “Her words are winged electric”
great tribute. & I agree, Susan is the truth.
well deserved. Susan, my duet partner and friend, carves words in , on, and from the hardest of stones with the softest of her burrowing touch, sensitive tongue and twirling fingers! A fitting tribute to a great lady who weaves words with wit, warmth and wand!
Am still sleep deprived from Xmas travel and I am sure I do not make sense in this truth filled tribute.
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Thanks Noel and everybody else. I am so pleased that this made Susan happy and her many fans as well.
Well said David, and rightly put.
Thanks Trent.